Says so much in so few words.http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/chilling-out.html
Well done and powerful message you have conveyed. Enjoy your day. :)
I too saw a boomerang...like this surreal haiku
a haiku feel but with a rhyme -- somehow matched the feel of the image perfectly. nice!
Yes, I liked the haiku feel. Thanks for sharing.
I like the boomerang and screaming ~Nice one ~
Well done.
This really says it...so much energy!
excellent haiku-especially the last line!
I must agree... 11 words = excelllent post!.. JJRod'z
This was an enjoyable haiku. Interesting to imagine a dream like this painting. The rhymes are quiet clever. Thank you for sharing. :o)
was that just after having pizza?
These few words pack a tremendous punch
nice..lvoe the boomerang...come round and round again...and perhaps we catch just a bit of those dreams...
Boomerangs at the ready... :)
Lovely write!Anna :o]
I took mine to the same country.
Concise but perfectly pitched.
I saw the boomerang, too.You threw it well.=)
Count me as one of the 'boomerang gang' ... nice poem!
boomerangs make the very best haiku!
Succinct and to the point. Like it!
I'm surprised no one has mentioned Don Quixote.
True, the boomerang is a key theme...
Neat. We don't often see rhymed haiku.
What an image you have conveyed with your words Rel....great writing!!
I'm a bit of a dreamer, too...lol
Nicely rhymed and timed! I like haiku's that pack a lot of punch!
Says so much in so few words.
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Well done and powerful message you have conveyed. Enjoy your day. :)
ReplyDeleteI too saw a boomerang...like this surreal haiku
ReplyDeletea haiku feel but with a rhyme -- somehow matched the feel of the image perfectly. nice!
ReplyDeleteYes, I liked the haiku feel. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI like the boomerang and screaming ~
ReplyDeleteNice one ~
Well done.
ReplyDeleteThis really says it...so much energy!
ReplyDeleteexcellent haiku-especially the last line!
ReplyDeleteI must agree... 11 words = excelllent post!..
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
This was an enjoyable haiku. Interesting to imagine a dream like this painting. The rhymes are quiet clever. Thank you for sharing. :o)
ReplyDeletewas that just after having pizza?
ReplyDeleteThese few words pack a tremendous punch
ReplyDeletenice..lvoe the boomerang...come round and round again...and perhaps we catch just a bit of those dreams...
ReplyDeleteBoomerangs at the ready... :)
ReplyDeleteLovely write!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I took mine to the same country.
ReplyDeleteConcise but perfectly pitched.
ReplyDeleteI saw the boomerang, too.
ReplyDeleteYou threw it well.
=)
Count me as one of the 'boomerang gang' ... nice poem!
ReplyDeleteboomerangs make the very best haiku!
ReplyDeleteSuccinct and to the point. Like it!
ReplyDeleteI'm surprised no one has mentioned Don Quixote.
ReplyDeleteTrue, the boomerang is a key theme...
ReplyDeleteNeat. We don't often see rhymed haiku.
ReplyDeleteWhat an image you have conveyed with your words Rel....great writing!!
ReplyDeleteI'm a bit of a dreamer, too...lol
ReplyDeleteNicely rhymed and timed! I like haiku's that pack a lot of punch!
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