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Sunday, January 22, 2012

magpie for the Mag.

formerly; Magpie Tales

Posing for artist
Dressed in your nakedness.
Artificial light


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21 comments:

  1. Kathe W.11:00 AM

    excellent haiku!

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  2. Suz11:02 AM

    wow who knew you could haiku?
    tidbist to ponder

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  3. Everyday Goddess11:17 AM

    haiku is a great choice for this prompt, well done.

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  4. Other Mary11:32 AM

    You got it all in those 17 syllables!

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  5. Semaphore12:34 PM

    Good choice of form for the image.

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  6. Laurie Kolp1:04 PM

    Perfect... love your haiku.

    http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/warning-small-package.html

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  7. Tess Kincaid4:49 PM

    Excellent...

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  8. Anonymous5:50 PM

    I liked the contrast between the naked and the artificial.

    ~Shawna
    rosemarymint.wordpress.com

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  9. Scarlet6:45 PM

    Nice senryu poem ~

    http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/01/sevenling-woman.html

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  10. Ms. Geek Goddess7:08 PM

    Nice! Perfect take on the prompt! :)

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  11. Maude Lynn8:07 PM

    Fabulous haiku!

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  12. kelvin s.m.10:32 PM

    ...ah, yes haiku is perfect form for this image and i haven't thought of it lately... great read!!!(:

    ~Kelvin

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  13. Susie Clevenger11:07 PM

    great haiku...it caught the image with just the write words

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  14. Brian Miller11:51 PM

    unfortunately in many cases...it is not the only artificial thing in the scene...smiles.

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  15. Berowne6:47 AM

    Artificial light and for some reason a very rumpled background...

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  16. Trellissimo4:52 PM

    Words as delicate as the photo...

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  17. Yvonne Osborne7:58 PM

    Artificial everything here, methinks. Haiku is always a treat. Short and sweet yet packing a punch.

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  18. Tumblewords:10:18 PM

    love the opposites...

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  19. Doctor FTSE12:43 AM

    A thoughtful haiku. Thank you.

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  20. Carrie Van Horn1:52 PM

    A cool and thought provoking haiku Rel! :-)

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  21. Helena4:56 PM

    Captured the essence of the pic in less than 30 syllables! Neat!

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