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Sunday, April 01, 2012

Magpie # 111

image: ParkeHarrison

Over & over I’ve heard you,
Over and over.  Always from
Women;                                 
Poets and otherwise, adoringly
They refer to you.

I’m appalled, a Roman Catholic,
Schooled in the sacrilege of
Suicide’s
Mortal sin.
Don’t speak too loudly
If at all.

How can you
Glorify her?

And so, never have I read your verse;
You are an abomination,
And besides, you are a poetess
Who drivels in metaphor, simile,
Ancient references…
Abstrusely!
I read you today-
You’re alive within
Me.

So clear in your obtuseness,
I sense if not feel
Your pain.
      I’m your convert…
        Say hello for me
            To your
              Father-
And mine,
        Should he pass by.



14 comments:

  1. heh...

    plath? or another victim of their own hand...suicide is rough but i figure if gods got a problem with it he can judge, in the mean time i will enjoy them all...

    love that you finally read and let her get inside of you...and perhaps turned your own beliefs a bit...with her in the afterlife now

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  2. Anonymous4:37 PM

    I'm struggling to find words for this. Its impact is heavy, let's just say that. You captured well the judgmental tone of those who wage war against an act, a concept, a belief and in the end, change their minds and embrace what they once despised. Suicide, abortion, murder. You have tackled this topic well.

    ~Shawna
    rosemarymint.wordpress.com

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  3. I won't take this personally..whoever she is..good luck to both of you..poetesses/ poets, aren't always sensible!

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  4. i really like where you went with this...great poem

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  5. Sharply saddened by an act so final..yet can we still celebrate a life so handled?
    Intense
    Hugs
    SueAnn

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  6. Heavy and tense. Well done.

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  7. I'm glad she's alive within you now...excellent write Rel...one of your best...

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  8. Sharp edges Rel, razor slashing stuff !

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  9. Finely lined. Deep and strong.

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  10. Now that's clever...

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  11. I like where you took this, and I especially appreciated the ending.

    =)

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  12. So well written, I could feel the initial judgment and the eventual forgiveness. Beautiful.

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  13. Hey! Hey! Rel, this has to be in my top ten Magpie's. I really could feel every line.

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  14. having been a fervent fan of plath since my tender years i recognized her right away.. may she reside within your dark halls forever,, as she walks with me forever in mine..

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