Perfect! I really like your Magpie!
I LOVE it – very smart poem!loveNlightGabi
Oooh -- this one kind of gave me a shiver. I loved it. Every word is just right.
oh I saw this coming!loved iteven though it scared me
Lovely poetry.CJ xx
oooooh - time to turn the lights on and be sure the doors are locked :)
i hate when that happens! lol!seriously good magpie!!
Yes this is how I saw her too, but your poem is so much better than mine.Christine
Love your words Rel... a true master of the written word! Great Magpie!
Great rhyming. It's funny how so many people wrote horror...
Creepy and wonderful, Rel!!
wow, rel, your magpie is good, really good!! when i looked at the prompt this week all i could come up with is a big z-e-r-o but yours is fascinating, rich with flavor! what a fine work you have wrought, my friend!
An intriguing Magpie ... for sure!!!
Almost like an incantation - it builds a perfect picture!
I like magpies. Ours are very time, cos they get the leftover cat biscuits.
Gripping from the first line. :)
Well done. Really enjoyed this one. So interesting what comes out of us.
She'd be best advised to keep her mouth closed with those magpies flying about!!! ;)
Nice! The poem's meter evokes the frozen state of the child.
Very original.
cast forever...quick and sharp...and loved the flow of your magpie rel!
Such a neat little tale of horror, nothing more is needed..great!
Perfect photo and text.
This was the perfect fit for that picture! I loved it.
Got to love the witches! (3 witches always make me think of Macbeth.) Anyway, felt sorry for the poor frozen girl!
loved reading it.
Quick and Crafty...I like a witches mix!
loved cast immobile in her dreams--great magpie
Perfect! I really like your Magpie!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE it – very smart poem!
ReplyDeleteloveNlight
Gabi
Oooh -- this one kind of gave me a shiver. I loved it. Every word is just right.
ReplyDeleteoh I saw this coming!
ReplyDeleteloved it
even though it scared me
Lovely poetry.
ReplyDeleteCJ xx
oooooh - time to turn the lights on and be sure the doors are locked :)
ReplyDeletei hate when that happens! lol!
ReplyDeleteseriously good magpie!!
Yes this is how I saw her too, but your poem is so much better than mine.
ReplyDeleteChristine
Love your words Rel... a true master of the written word! Great Magpie!
ReplyDeleteGreat rhyming. It's funny how so many people wrote horror...
ReplyDeleteCreepy and wonderful, Rel!!
ReplyDeletewow, rel, your magpie is good, really good!! when i looked at the prompt this week all i could come up with is a big z-e-r-o but yours is fascinating, rich with flavor! what a fine work you have wrought, my friend!
ReplyDeleteAn intriguing Magpie ... for sure!!!
ReplyDeleteAlmost like an incantation - it builds a perfect picture!
ReplyDeleteI like magpies. Ours are very time, cos they get the leftover cat biscuits.
ReplyDeleteGripping from the first line. :)
ReplyDeleteWell done. Really enjoyed this one. So interesting what comes out of us.
ReplyDeleteShe'd be best advised to keep her mouth closed with those magpies flying about!!! ;)
ReplyDeleteNice! The poem's meter evokes the frozen state of the child.
ReplyDeleteVery original.
ReplyDeletecast forever...quick and sharp...and loved the flow of your magpie rel!
ReplyDeleteSuch a neat little tale of horror, nothing more is needed..great!
ReplyDeletePerfect photo and text.
ReplyDeleteThis was the perfect fit for that picture! I loved it.
ReplyDeleteGot to love the witches! (3 witches always make me think of Macbeth.) Anyway, felt sorry for the poor frozen girl!
ReplyDeleteloved reading it.
ReplyDeleteQuick and Crafty...I like a witches mix!
ReplyDeleteloved cast immobile in her dreams--great magpie
ReplyDelete