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Sunday, February 05, 2012

Children's stories.....

Prism heart behold
His granite fingers unfold;
Bakulev's tale told.

21 comments:

  1. that says it all, beautifully put..

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  2. Neat, sweet and complete. You're the master of mini.....!

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  3. Short and sweet!

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  4. A gifted tribute to a gifted doctor. I love your Haiku, Rel. Thanks for sharing this treasure.

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  5. Prism heart...love that! Beautifully written.

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  6. excellent! a gem (no pun intended)

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  7. tight little write rel...nice hit on the surgeon ref as well...

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  8. Crystalline perfection!

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  9. why Rel...who new?
    you're a poet too

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  10. Very nice! Expressively told with small means! Beautiful!

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  11. well done Rel..thanks for sharing

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  12. That is one of the cleanest haikus I have ever read! thank you for sharing

    http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/02/grave-so-fine.html

    Wander

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  13. Cardiovascular surgeon ... brilliant!

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  14. Brilliant - so much said in so few words!

    Anna :o)

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  15. Thanks, Rel. Inspired me to Google "Bakulev"

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