Tuesday 27 February, 2007
Week #39
Prompt: Color(ful)
Week #39
Prompt: Color(ful)
Kindred spirits meet
Butterfly finds it's flower
Transcending logic
Conceivably happenstance
Imaginably 'twas fate
Butterfly finds it's flower
Transcending logic
Conceivably happenstance
Imaginably 'twas fate
Labels: colorful, One deep breath, Tanka
24 Comments:
Morning Rel,
I know you have posted pictures of flowers and are poeming about butterflies. But I see, I see this as a poem about lovers.
Thanks. :)
Like Brian, I sense a hint of romance and love here. I love the colours in the photos, deep and vibrant....
Lovely poem and gorgeous flowers!
Hee hee- there must be a love affair between the butterfly and the flower- who can resist either?
Just wonderful, Rel!
Those flowers are some of the most sensual I've ever seen. Are they hibiscus? As usual, beautiful poem.
Your poetry is so fresh and sweet, Rel. I agree with everyone else - this could easily be a love poem.
You blog is such a lovely place to start the day :)
I agree Rel. It feels romantic! The flowers are beautiful, makes me think of Spring. Not that Im complainin about the winter....just sayin!
I just adore hibiscus and your tanka was refreshing. Lovely!
I definitely agree with the romantic version of this - very nice "double entendre" in this poem :)
What a delight those flowers are to eyes that have only seen snow lately! lol Beautiful shots, Rel, and I love the poem too!!!
Your play on words were beautiful.
Keep taking those deep breaths, Rel...that is lovely. :)
So are the flowers...a calming and beautiful post. Thank you.
Lovely poem and the flowers are such wonderful rich colours. Hope your cold has gone now and you are fighting fit again.
Didn't they make a movie about the flower in the second photo? I think it was called The Color Purple.
I love the double meaning here. The photos are brillant. Love hibiscus/ Lovely.
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Lovely pics~
Excellent verse. I beleive, sometimes to my detriment, that everything happens for a reason. Serendipity, some call it.
Wonderful Haiku! I love the pictures too!
Gorgeous flowers and tanka! Very romantic indeed!
Beautiful moment you've created!
what powerful images. i think i would be a tad intimidated if i was a lone butterfly or bee.
Your picture of the hibiscus flowers reminded me so much of home! Now I'm nostalgic.
wow rel!
forgive the pun but this haiku took away my one breath :-)
and the red of the first flower is my favorite color..just gorgeous!
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