Tuesday, March 27, 2007


Week #43

Short and Sweet (One Line Haiku)


Winter floes down river toward spring.


Redwing's home awaits.


Surging, rushing, washing time away.

22 Comments:

Blogger paris parfait said...

Lovely words and photos!

1:28 PM  
Anonymous Rose Dewy Knickers said...

Hi Rel,

I love the play on words in the first haiku. I laughed and squealed.

Rose

xo

2:29 PM  
Anonymous susanlavonne said...

i love these, remi :-)
my rock could very easily have come from these very waters!

3:52 PM  
Blogger overactive-imagination said...

The last photo and line remind me of how my life feels right now...like everything is moving so quickly and the time is rushing by as fast as the water across those rocks.
Loved this post.
Hope all is well.
Dawn

4:02 PM  
Blogger jellyhead said...

I love these 'short and sweet' haikus - of course my favourite is the very clever 'winter floes' one!

5:06 PM  
Blogger Catch said...

good ones Rel and I sure hope your right about Spring!

5:36 PM  
Anonymous Robin (Capitulation) said...

With the first haiku, it seems we were thinking along the same lines, but the last one got me--time rushes by so powerfully!

11:58 PM  
Blogger Rowan said...

Lovely words and pictures - I especially like the photo of the ice floes and the play on words that goes with it. Glad you are feeling better,no backsliding now, think positive!:)

2:29 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

Wonderful photos and words, and yes I too really like the wordplay in the first!

3:48 AM  
Blogger jem said...

The images and the words compliment each other personally. The first one I especially like. There is movement and change and power. Great.

7:09 AM  
Blogger Tammy said...

Hi Rel, I enjoyed all three and I liked the flow of hope :)

Hope those meds are doing their job ;)

1:19 PM  
Blogger Churlita said...

Beautiful. All of them are absolutely beautiful.

2:25 PM  
Anonymous Sandy said...

I love that river shot, reminds me of upcountry Maine. The idea of the river heading toward spring is just right.

5:52 PM  
Blogger PEA said...

Wonderful Rel, simply wonderful!! You always seem to find the perfect pictures to go with your words:-) I do hope you're feeling much better by now? I'm glad my parcel reached you safely..hopefully nothing was broken!! Hugs xox

8:26 PM  
Blogger M said...

here's my one line haiku for you:

evening blog reading, glad I stopped here!

8:46 PM  
Blogger Becca said...

Great one liner's Rel...I love "winter floes" ~I'm a big fan of the double entendre :)

10:19 PM  
Blogger Marcia said...

Beautiful photos. I love the play on winter floes.

11:32 PM  
Blogger Lee said...

Great pics...reflective words. :)

2:04 AM  
Blogger Puss-in-Boots said...

Hi Rel, how are you? Great haikus and fabulous photos.

Thanks for your comments on my posts...I've been very slack on my reading of posts.

Have a good rest of the week.

Cheers and take care.

4:16 AM  
Anonymous liquidquick said...

i can certainly relate to the last one... especially the rocky ride at breakneck speeds.

1:14 PM  
Blogger Jone said...

What wonderful one-liners. The photos are beautiful

9:35 AM  
Blogger Regina Clare Jane said...

I missed quite a few from last week's ODB- but, better late than never! These are beautiful pics on one-line haikus, Rel... I love the redwing's nest!

9:13 AM  

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