Tuesday, April 03, 2007

In the wake
Of spring's perennial
I absolve winter
For any dismal
Outlook I may have

As the seasons
Ebb and flow
so too, my moods
Rise and fall.
Pulled by the moon
To wither in the darkness.

Then, like the sunflower
Turning it's face
To the sun---
Blithe spirit resprouts
From my cool but
Warming core
To show its blush.

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Blogger chiefbiscuit said...

Look at you - you've gone and surpassed even your usual high standard and produced this beauty! I love how you've used the prompts in the first stanza so naturally. It's a great poem Rel I hope you are proud of it - you should be. I'm going back to read it again.

9:41 PM  
Blogger Churlita said...

Beautiful. I would love the sentiment even more if it weren't in the twenties with the wind chill right now.

1:07 AM  
Blogger PEA said...

Your poem certainly does describe how we also change with the seasons...beautiful Rel! I'm so glad you enjoyed my Sugar Bush post, everyone really should experience it:-) Have a wonderful day my friend!! xox

7:44 AM  
Anonymous Brian said...

I love how seamlessly you weave your emotions into the seasons. The hope and promise you show in your ending lines is beautiful.

2:17 PM  
Blogger jellyhead said...

Yes, Rel - banish winter with its colds and flus that have plagued you. Be gone winter, hello spring, hurry up summer!

Your poetry just keeps getting better.

8:43 AM  
Blogger Marcia said...

This is absolutely beautiful, Rel.

4:28 PM  
Anonymous Roberta said...

I too would love to absolve winter, if only it would stop snowing this spring!

6:03 PM  

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