Lovely haikus and photos - nice contrast to your last post. It's good to see all the signs of spring appearing, our crocus are well over now and there's a gteen haze starting to appear that says the trees are starting to unfurl their new leaves.
my first response was "breath-taking!" but then i realized how totally dorky that would sound considering the source :-) so i will instead say...brilliant! esp the "birth" haiku...
I like the second one...'Sky's reflection thrust upward' says so much more than may be evident at first read. Perhaps that is why we all love the shorter poetic forms like haiku. Nice work.
I would be content to only have viewed the first, but then came the second and third. I leave knowing there is a fourth and fifth not being shared and I want to read them.
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Lovely haikus and photos - nice contrast to your last post. It's good to see all the signs of spring appearing, our crocus are well over now and there's a gteen haze starting to appear that says the trees are starting to unfurl their new leaves.
Lovely....thank goodness new life is on it`s way.
tea
xo
my first response was "breath-taking!" but then i realized how totally dorky that would sound considering the source :-)
so i will instead say...brilliant! esp the "birth" haiku...
The photos and haiku complement each other so well. Spring is on its way. Love the last haku especially.
I enjoyed these and well done for the nifty use of spiral in the last one to fit in with the Poetry Thursday one word prompt earlier this week!
Hi Remiman,
thanks for visiting my blog! Yes, it´s a pitty that the rose sculpture was so expensive!
I love your pictures especially those from the white-lilac crocus!
Greetings, Verena
Beautiful pictures and haikus! I loved the second one especially...
"winter melts" -- love that.
Such beautiful photos of spring. This is the first year I've seen the striped crocus.
All three are lovely, but I especially love the last one. :)
The were all fabulous Rel! Glad you have that spring back in your step ;)
I like the second one...'Sky's reflection thrust upward' says so much more than may be evident at first read. Perhaps that is why we all love the shorter poetic forms like haiku. Nice work.
I would be content to only have viewed the first, but then came the second and third. I leave knowing there is a fourth and fifth not being shared and I want to read them.
Love, love crocus.
Beautiful haiku Rel. :)
winter melts got me, too! And, I have to say thank God.
We are supposed to get more 3-5 more inches of snow tomorrow night!
I love the pics and the verse, Rel...well done. :)
I'm so glad winter is melting! I could hear the rushing water in your first picture~very beautiful :)
All very nice - I especially like the last one, being so partial to spirals.
These are a gorgeous honoring of spring time. I love the catchy words; thrust, spirals, coaxes and velvet corolla!
Rel
I imagine your tender spirit melts many cold hearts.
Lucky are those who know you well.
Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.
How very lovely!!!
"Life spirals
to touch beauty
At every turn"
beautiful photos and haiku. these last lines really caught me.
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