Wednesday, May 02, 2007

Sea-sand brings ashore
Remnants of lives from our past.
Patiently awaits.

Intrepid pulling
Moon rythmn ebbs high then low.
Heart's emotion too.

Sea gales whipped roil
Boats heave, break, join Davey Jones.
Watery grave, Amen.

Sand grains
From time's beginning
Lay at our feet.

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Blogger susanlavonne said...

all of these are truly stunning, rel, but i must say my jaw dropped at the line "Watery grave, Amen"
and the "sand grains" one too..heck, i just loved them all :-)

10:14 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i found these haiku so thought provoking - the power, intensity and enduring strength of the sea are all evoked so well. thanks for introducing me to that fantastically dark painting too!

12:06 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

the sand bringing the past ashore is an amazing image.

1:43 PM  
Blogger Rowan said...

All these Haiku produce strong images but I love the last one, somehow that thought joins us all together over the generations - right to the beginnings of this earth. It's a rather comforting idea. Been hors de combat these last few days, some horrid virus:(

3:18 PM  
Blogger Churlita said...

I miss the sea and the beach. It's hard not to feel land locked in Iowa.

5:10 PM  
Blogger PEA said...

So beautiful put together dear Rel...the sands of time could truly tell a story! xox

7:21 PM  
Blogger chiefbiscuit said...

I like the circular feel to this.

10:51 PM  
Blogger Roswila said...

Really like that last one.

11:03 PM  
Blogger jellyhead said...

Rel, these are truly beautiful.

7:27 AM  
Blogger Lee said...

This poems seems apt for the full moon. The night is so bright and clear here at the moment...I love it!

9:56 AM  
Blogger strauss said...

Really enjoyed the Davey Jones. Especailly teh watery grave and teh sea gales imagery.

7:28 PM  

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