posted by rel at 5:26 AM
I like this one!
I like the coin-slot thought...
The photograph, along with the "coin slot" image in your haiku? Bravo, Rel.
Oh - that's wonderful! What a fun, playful image.
I love image with poetry. Beautiful.
The "coin slot" imagery is wonderful- it's almost excatly like that!Clever, Rel!
I too agree. That coin slot imagery is to good.
Hi rel! Hi ku--I agree. the sun through the coin slot is a fantastic image. A fine poem! A great example of striking a match to illuminate something very brightly for a moment--which is what haiku is supposed to do, I think.
I love the photo and I love the poem - double bonus.
A "coin slot" was wonderful Rel! I want to come soak up that stillness. Nice! XXOO
Yes--the coin slot phrase works well, and the picture enhances the poem. You've caught that magical moment perfectly!
Very cool haiku Rel... loved the photo!
That is a fabulous haiku, Rel. Loved it so much I was forced to comment!
Only a few words but meaning so very much! Wonderful my friend, just wonderful!!! xox
Yes, yes! Jackpot.
The sun sliding through a coin slot...so powerful and original! That makes so much sense in a visual way. I got a new view out of your "Hi Ku" (LOL).
No deposit, no return, right? Nice poem (and the picture was breathtaking!)
"coin slot" is an amazing phrase to describe it... love this image!
Beautiful photo, and the haiku created such a wonderful visual for me!
RelOh, you poetic soul, you...
My mind is in a whirl. I must write some more poetry to help get every thing into perpestive. Thanks, Rel. :)
I want to be there!Such a beautiful "hi ku." ("Eye" noticed that on the PT link thread, "yew".):)
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