
Message dans une bouteille
October 16th, 2001
October 16th, 2001

A tall, sinewy, sun darkened, ruggedly handsome man, Jim had never married. He had dated a few girls over the years, but none of them had rung his bell, so to speak.
On the morning of 1 October, 2000, at first light, Jim was jogging along the beach, as was his habit on Tuesdays, Thursdays and Sundays. His attention was drawn to a glint, a flickering sparkle in the sand at the edge of the ebbing tide.
Normally, he would have passed by without a missed step, but today he stopped suddenly. As if mesmerized, he slowly, haltingly approached what he now recognized as a bottle, or at least a bottle neck, sticking up out of the sand.
Jimmy thought to himself, "if this bottle is corked and has a message inside, I'll crap my drawers!"
You see, Jim Devlin, had been having a recurring dream of late. Always, for as long as he could remember, he had had vivid dreams. This one was different. For nine nights the recurring dream had him running on a beach, discovering a bottle containing a message, a poem really. As he read the poem a vision of a young women would appear and she would be reciting the poem in a foreign language, French he thought, and although he neither spoke nor understood French, he understood every word she spoke. The poem was dated 1699 and signed Elodie.

Running faster than his normal pace, he raced back to his house, dashed through the kitchen doorway, and pulled the silverware drawer out so hard that it crashed to the floor, spilling the contents all over the floor. He spotted the sought after corkscrew under his chair near the right front leg. Retrieving the corkscrew, he set about the task of uncorking his find. Realizing the apparent agedness of the cork and bottle, he carefully screwed the corkscrew right down the middle of the cork. With slow, even pressure he pulled on the cork extractor. At first it seemed as if it were cemented into the bottle, giving no movement. Gently twisting first to the right and next left, he finally felt a release. Slowly, with the precision of a surgeon, he pulled the cork, whole, from it's home.

"This is too uncanny, too unreal," he thought as he undid the perfect bow holding the tie around the parchment. "I'm not sure I want to read this." His hands, gingerly, unrolled the paper.
At the top was written:
1699
À Jacques,
It was written in French, but as he read it he became entranced and he could hear the black haired woman of his dream reading the words and he knew them to mean:
Alone here, among the many
I wait for you my love.
Too long have you been gone.
The sea has stolen you from me.
She has always been
Jealous of our love.
But though she captured you,
She cannot have you forever.
I will wait here
On our dock,
The place we last
Kissed farewell.
I will wait here
By the sea,
For as long as eternity.
I will wait here
by the sea
For I know the pull
Of our love
Will bring you home to me.
I will wait here
On the dock;
Here in Marseilles.
Elodie
Tears streaming down his face, his throat all choked up, he knew what he must do. He picked up his cell from the counter and quick dialed his sister. When he got her voice mail, he left this message: I'm leaving today for Marseilles, France. Will call when I get there.
16 Comments:
I loved that. What a wonderful story. Will we get to read more?
Churlita,
Yes, the story continues!
rel
Better!
Good to see you back, Rel!
I love it. A little mystery, some suspense. Nice story.
That's WONDERFUL!!!!
And then?!?!!!
What happened next?
You can't do that! Start something that good and then let it stop mid-breath.
I forgot I was even looking at a computer screen. I could see him, there in the kitchen, with nothing but this one thing in his mind and the unstoppable determination to get to his destination; he HAS to go, a moral imperative....
And it stopped! AGH!
Please finish.
Scarlett & Viaggiatore
OH!
And PS - there's something for you over at my place.
S. & V.
Very intriguing! I'm so glad there will be more!
Fabulous story - please hurry and post the next installment!
Oh my, that was beautiful. Dreams come true after all...thank you.
I love the mystery and romance, and I want to read more!
I like how you incorporated a recurring dream into the story.
Oh WOW! I couldn't read fast enough, to find out what happened! I was left with goosebumps on my legs (I'm a sucker for moving romantic stories)
Brilliant, Rel!
more more more!!!!! this was wonderful!!!!
great story Rel.....waiting for the rest of it...ya got me hanging !
That photo, the sea, Marseille!
Wonderful read!
Wonderful! I can't wait for the next installment.
This is a wonderful opening chapter Rel! I do hope we are going to have further instalments? I really think this has the makings of a whole book.
Well done to your son also - it's nice to see the good guys coming out on top for once. You must be, and obviously are:), very proud of him.
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