Wednesday, February 06, 2008

#72

the thoughts of falling
disturbed
their peace of mind.
still,
they crossed over
the bridge.

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12 Comments:

Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

That accompanying photograph reaches out along with the words.

7:15 AM  
Blogger Christy said...

enjoyed crossing the bridge with these brave souls, enjoyed both the poem and picture though the poem painted the picture well on it's own.

7:24 AM  
OpenID Rose Dewy Knickers said...

Great picture for the poem. I can feel the sway.

Rose

xo

8:01 AM  
Blogger susan said...

Picture perfect. Thanks for the read.

11:10 AM  
Anonymous UL said...

Very nicely done rel...there's so much courage that comes through here.

11:57 AM  
Blogger TC said...

This was a good read even before the photo, but the pic really made it.

Nicely done.

12:36 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

I can tell you that if I were on that bridge...in the photo, I'd be very disturbed and my mind would have to be still to get across it.

Well done.

S

2:55 PM  
Blogger Linda Jacobs said...

How often we have to take a leap of faith when crossing "bridges" and just go on!

I love how this can speak to anyone!

5:12 PM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

Wow! How impressive is that? Both the words and the image. Wow! I'm still shaking at the thought of crossing there.

7:26 PM  
Blogger PEA said...

Being terrified of heights, I got dizzy just thinking of being on this swinging bridge! lol Perfect words for the picture. xox

9:05 PM  
Anonymous pia said...

Were I on that bridge I would try to take a leap of faith but end up with a panic attack

1:31 PM  
Blogger Bone said...

For some reason, the pic made me think of people fleeing their homeland with all their possessions on their back.

Nicely done.

1:26 PM  

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