Friday, March 21, 2008

Friday 5:
kiss
train
fence
vale
simper


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While
I
Simper,
Fences close
'Round my vale of years.
Blow a kiss to life's passing train.

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10 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

rel
HOW PERFECT!!
D

7:20 AM  
Blogger paisley said...

i keep hoping the lost years will show up in the thrift shop and i can purchase them at a good price and use them for years to come......

9:50 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice work dad! I like this one:)

J

10:41 AM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

Great fib! And it would be nice to garner some of past to reuse.

12:34 PM  
Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

I simply love fib poems. Your works for me!

watered down

1:00 PM  
Blogger Churlita said...

Very nice. You always do such clever things with prompts.

4:08 PM  
Blogger Michelle Johnson said...

Where does the time go? I remember that song from my youth. Hearing it now, I suddenly feel old. Thanks for sharing this and allowing me a trip down memory lane.

Your fib compliments your video choice well. I wish we could pick up some of those past years and blend them back into our lives again. Possibly bringing youth back into play as well. Thanks for stopping by Poefusion. You are welcome anytime. Have a nice day.

1:58 PM  
Blogger Russell Ragsdale said...

A well wrought Fib. Terse and surprisingly effective!

3:52 AM  
Anonymous OneMoreBeliever said...

whada great timeless fib!... and peter, paul and mary are a great american treasure... thank you for posting the song...

8:15 PM  
Blogger UL said...

Wow, rel, ddint know you had attemped this one.. this was lovely..will have to attempt a fib myself.

8:21 AM  

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