Friday 5:kiss
train
fence
vale
simper
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While
I
Simper,
Fences close
'Round my vale of years.
Blow a kiss to life's passing train.
Labels: fibonacci, friday 5 at Poefusion
posted by rel at 4:34 AM
10 Comments:
rel
HOW PERFECT!!
D
i keep hoping the lost years will show up in the thrift shop and i can purchase them at a good price and use them for years to come......
nice work dad! I like this one:)
J
Great fib! And it would be nice to garner some of past to reuse.
I simply love fib poems. Your works for me!
watered down
Very nice. You always do such clever things with prompts.
Where does the time go? I remember that song from my youth. Hearing it now, I suddenly feel old. Thanks for sharing this and allowing me a trip down memory lane.
Your fib compliments your video choice well. I wish we could pick up some of those past years and blend them back into our lives again. Possibly bringing youth back into play as well. Thanks for stopping by Poefusion. You are welcome anytime. Have a nice day.
A well wrought Fib. Terse and surprisingly effective!
whada great timeless fib!... and peter, paul and mary are a great american treasure... thank you for posting the song...
Wow, rel, ddint know you had attemped this one.. this was lovely..will have to attempt a fib myself.
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