Thursday, June 26, 2008

There is a rumor
about
that says;
spontaneous thought
has been locked away
in the secluded
corner
where thoughts are
hidden,
to fester and maim
silently.
try as I may,
can't shake this
feeling

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11 Comments:

Anonymous Pam said...

Nicely written. Makes me think of Orwell and the other great writers who have predicted thought control.

8:09 AM  
Blogger paisley said...

rumor or not,, i tend to believe there is more than a seed of truth there.....

8:25 AM  
Blogger anthonynorth said...

There's no dictator like a consensus. It certainly ruins spontaneous thought, yet still cons you you are free.
You put the problem beautifully here.

8:49 AM  
Anonymous Carole said...

Thought control...seems to be linked to language and books.

11:58 AM  
Blogger Tammy said...

Rel,
Spontaneous thought if hidden can maim. I agree and what a perfect shot to capture it. HUGS

1:28 PM  
Blogger TC said...

Kind of a scary thought.

3:24 PM  
Blogger Churlita said...

Very nice piece. I also like the tree.

3:28 PM  
Blogger jellyhead said...

Frightening stuff (with an appropriately spooky picture!)

5:14 PM  
Blogger Kay said...

Deep. Nice work! Well crafted poem that bears many readings.

6:14 PM  
Anonymous one more believer said...

traded in for complacency... freedom's just another world for nothin left to lose.. awesome photo...

7:02 PM  
Blogger tumblewords said...

You wrote truth and illustrated it with a picture of vision. Excellent post!

12:34 PM  

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