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posted by rel at 4:39 AM
ooh loved the Manhattan skyline image!
Pleasing to the eye and hand. You should revisit the pencil :)
Pleasing indeed! Your Magpie shines!
very nice with an amazing and sharp view of Manhattan....bkm
Manhattan skyline...paper scrapers!Love it! Once again I love how differntly everyone sees Willow's images. Great Magpie
in this case... less is more.. the minimalist point of view towards words is delightful here...pencils and skylines... good stuff! waiting game
Love the sharp simplicity in this one. Great Magpie! :-)
Oh, yes! Beautiful. Admirable view that you've captured.
hey rel, that's a good eye you've got there, seeing a manhattan skyline...this is one of the best magpies i've seen so far! by the way, do we even know how to use those yellow things anymore???have a great sunday, my friend :)
A nice little piece on the pencil!
Pencils...always trying to find one!Thanks for your comment on my last post, Rel. Yes I have lost weight, about 20 or so kg.
Short but every word counted, very clever!Christine
Yes, very pleasing, as was your poem.
Nice piece. I really should use a creative pencil more often. Used to love a good doodle!
So visual..well done!
Loved it. It's hard to sound like Yoda and make it beautiful. But you did. :)
ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW!loved loved loved it!!
love the allusion to the skyline...very nice. i love using a pencil...as long as it has an eraser...smiles. nice magpie!
I have a little trouble with the scratching sound the pencil makes when I write with it. I do like the fact that I can easily erase it though.
scenic end to a nicely written magpie!
LIked the vowel shift at the end if each stanza in place of a straight rhyme!
I love your poem about the pleasing look of the arrangement of pencils, like the Manhattan skyline. Simple and lovely.
cute take,few remarks say a lot.cheers!mine is up.
I really liked the opening it made me smile. Clever Magpie.
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