The indoor forest;
Leaves surrender to my shelves.
Imagination.
Labels: Magpie #66, Sunday Scribblings surrender
posted by rel at 8:04 PM
Monday, May 16, 2011
Labels: Magpie #66, Sunday Scribblings surrender
posted by rel at 8:04 PM
17 Comments:
Very imaginative take on the prompt. My magpie: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/05/16/open-book/
Very clever poem. Question: How many trees to fill the average library?
Very true and smart..says it all!
Fantastic Haiku, at first I thought of leaves people press in books, then I read it again. Very Clever indeed.
The magic of a library..what a unique use of the prompt..I am sure leaves would gladly give themselves up for magical thoughts..jae
an indoor forest...a wonderful metaphor and fab word play later...i could walk that forest forever...
Your haiku is lovely .... combining the splendor of a forest with a shelf full of books is inspired.
I adore the notion of books being an indoor forest. Beautiful, Rel.
I could live in that indoor forest for quite some time! At least when books are made, the trees go toward something wonderful and lasting!
O Yes! I love my indoor forest - yet had not considered it as such before. Thanks Rel!
Anna :o]
Perfect and beautiful Nicely done.
An indoor forest, maybe, but how manay outdoor saplings spring from it?
Provocative piece! Love it...
A cracking little Haiku. Inside and out!
'The indoor forest'. I like that. Nice Mag.
It's unanimous - the 'indoor forest' is a sure winner. Brilliant!
Have always wanted one of those indoor forests! Great Haiku :)
Tea
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