COCKSCOMB
Magpietales #80
Their feathers shorn
he leaves the shop
Cockscomb bright.
The night is young
Rain washed clean.
A different shearing
Awaits. The
rubber shod figure
will soon crow.
Labels: magpie #80 cockscomb
posted by rel at 1:10 PM
18 Comments:
a different shearing,
love the uplifting story.
well done.
Awaits. The
rubber shod figure
will soon crow.
enjoyed every single word.
well done.
sexy...
Yes, I too enjoyed the positive take on the pic. Great write.
What would he then be shearing? Not sheep would it? Love the staccato bursts of words in the verse.
Hank
Enjoyed every single word too.
Anna :o]
Clever...
Wonderfully worldly!
Seconding Cad's comment. VERY clever.
I don't understand?
nothing like a fresh cut and shave to make you feel like a new man...smiles.
Freshness exuberates in this one... like the morning to the day.
Brilliant burst of imagery!
Cockscomb bright......
I like that phrase.......
~Mimi
www.clooagepirate.blogspot.com
The rain surely knows how to wash away a lot of things.
Cheers,
Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com
This has a lovely rhythm.
Crow away, cockscomb!
Someone has been transformed for the better. I love that pic too.
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