Sunday, January 29, 2012

dream stream....





Images in my dream
Boomerang until I scream.
Celestial star stream.

30 Comments:

Blogger Laurie Kolp said...

Says so much in so few words.

http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/chilling-out.html

9:55 AM  
Blogger Grammy said...

Well done and powerful message you have conveyed. Enjoy your day. :)

10:00 AM  
Blogger Kat Mortensen said...

Yes! I saw that boomerang too! The last line is killer!

10:59 AM  
Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

I too saw a boomerang...like this surreal haiku

12:13 PM  
Blogger susan m hinckley said...

a haiku feel but with a rhyme -- somehow matched the feel of the image perfectly. nice!

12:32 PM  
Blogger Doctor FTSE said...

Yes, I liked the haiku feel. Thanks for sharing.

1:26 PM  
Blogger Heaven said...

I like the boomerang and screaming ~

Nice one ~

2:47 PM  
Blogger Karen said...

Well done.

3:10 PM  
Blogger Lyn said...

This really says it...so much energy!

3:20 PM  
Blogger Taylor Boomer said...

cute...

3:40 PM  
Blogger Kathe W. said...

excellent haiku-especially the last line!

3:57 PM  
Blogger JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

I must agree... 11 words = excelllent post!..

JJRod'z

4:18 PM  
Blogger Linda said...

This was an enjoyable haiku. Interesting to imagine a dream like this painting. The rhymes are quiet clever. Thank you for sharing. :o)

5:02 PM  
Blogger Suz said...

was that just after having pizza?

6:51 PM  
Blogger Rene Foran said...

These few words pack a tremendous punch

9:15 PM  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

nice..lvoe the boomerang...come round and round again...and perhaps we catch just a bit of those dreams...

11:10 PM  
Blogger Jinksy said...

Boomerangs at the ready... :)

1:49 AM  
Blogger HyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely write!

Anna :o]

4:47 AM  
Blogger booguloo said...

I took mine to the same country.

9:56 AM  
Blogger Little Nell said...

Concise but perfectly pitched.

2:25 PM  
Blogger Sue said...

I saw the boomerang, too.

You threw it well.

=)

3:07 PM  
Blogger Helen said...

Count me as one of the 'boomerang gang' ... nice poem!

9:57 PM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

boomerangs make the very best haiku!

10:09 PM  
Blogger Dave King said...

Succinct and to the point. Like it!

9:21 AM  
Blogger booguloo said...

I'm surprised no one has mentioned Don Quixote.

9:39 AM  
Blogger Berowne said...

True, the boomerang is a key theme...

1:38 PM  
Blogger Doctor FTSE said...

Neat. We don't often see rhymed haiku.

2:54 AM  
Blogger Carrie Burtt said...

What an image you have conveyed with your words Rel....great writing!!

11:46 AM  
Blogger Cad said...

I'm a bit of a dreamer, too...lol

2:09 AM  
Blogger Helena said...

Nicely rhymed and timed! I like haiku's that pack a lot of punch!

11:46 AM  

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