posted by rel at 8:50 AM
excellent haiku!
wow who knew you could haiku?tidbist to ponder
haiku is a great choice for this prompt, well done.
You got it all in those 17 syllables!
Good choice of form for the image.
Perfect... love your haiku.http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/warning-small-package.html
Excellent...
I liked the contrast between the naked and the artificial.~Shawnarosemarymint.wordpress.com
Nice senryu poem ~http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/01/sevenling-woman.html
Nice! Perfect take on the prompt! :)
Fabulous haiku!
...ah, yes haiku is perfect form for this image and i haven't thought of it lately... great read!!!(:~Kelvin
great haiku...it caught the image with just the write words
unfortunately in many cases...it is not the only artificial thing in the scene...smiles.
Artificial light and for some reason a very rumpled background...
Words as delicate as the photo...
Artificial everything here, methinks. Haiku is always a treat. Short and sweet yet packing a punch.
love the opposites...
A thoughtful haiku. Thank you.
A cool and thought provoking haiku Rel! :-)
Captured the essence of the pic in less than 30 syllables! Neat!
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excellent haiku!
wow who knew you could haiku?
tidbist to ponder
haiku is a great choice for this prompt, well done.
You got it all in those 17 syllables!
Good choice of form for the image.
Perfect... love your haiku.
http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/warning-small-package.html
Excellent...
I liked the contrast between the naked and the artificial.
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
Nice senryu poem ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.com/2012/01/sevenling-woman.html
Nice! Perfect take on the prompt! :)
Fabulous haiku!
...ah, yes haiku is perfect form for this image and i haven't thought of it lately... great read!!!(:
~Kelvin
great haiku...it caught the image with just the write words
unfortunately in many cases...it is not the only artificial thing in the scene...smiles.
Artificial light and for some reason a very rumpled background...
Words as delicate as the photo...
Artificial everything here, methinks. Haiku is always a treat. Short and sweet yet packing a punch.
love the opposites...
A thoughtful haiku. Thank you.
A cool and thought provoking haiku Rel! :-)
Captured the essence of the pic in less than 30 syllables! Neat!
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