Sunday, February 05, 2012

Children's stories.....

Prism heart behold
His granite fingers unfold;
Bakulev's tale told.

21 Comments:

Blogger Kay said...

that says it all, beautifully put..

11:40 AM  
Blogger Laurie Kolp said...

Oh, I do love this!

http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/02/stoned-love.html

12:46 PM  
Blogger Helena said...

Neat, sweet and complete. You're the master of mini.....!

1:15 PM  
Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

Beautiful, Rel...

1:40 PM  
Blogger Rosamund Browne said...

Small is beautiful

2:40 PM  
Blogger ayala said...

Short and sweet!

3:09 PM  
Blogger Linda said...

A gifted tribute to a gifted doctor. I love your Haiku, Rel. Thanks for sharing this treasure.

3:28 PM  
Blogger Karen said...

Prism heart...love that! Beautifully written.

4:18 PM  
Blogger Kathe W. said...

excellent! a gem (no pun intended)

6:12 PM  
Blogger Arian Tejano said...

succinct

9:07 PM  
Blogger JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

Beautiful!

JJRod'z

9:36 PM  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

tight little write rel...nice hit on the surgeon ref as well...

11:42 PM  
Blogger Isabel Doyle said...

Crystalline perfection!

2:28 AM  
Blogger Suz said...

why Rel...who new?
you're a poet too

9:44 AM  
Blogger CC Champagne said...

Very nice! Expressively told with small means! Beautiful!

11:41 AM  
Blogger Wayne Pitchko said...

well done Rel..thanks for sharing

4:07 PM  
Blogger Wander said...

That is one of the cleanest haikus I have ever read! thank you for sharing

http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/02/grave-so-fine.html

Wander

7:03 PM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

How beautiful.

10:15 PM  
Blogger Helen said...

Cardiovascular surgeon ... brilliant!

11:23 AM  
Blogger HyperCRYPTICal said...

Brilliant - so much said in so few words!

Anna :o)

12:53 PM  
Blogger Doctor FTSE said...

Thanks, Rel. Inspired me to Google "Bakulev"

1:34 PM  

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