Sunday, September 16, 2012

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CRUSH

This is a story of Limerace Orgilis Le Beau, an accountant who lives in Paris France.

He wakes up late for work one morning and rushes to get to the metro because he despises the crush of the crowd. Once he's on the train he finds himself crushed up against a beautiful young women who reminds him of his new boss upon whom he has a crush.

Arriving at work he is told to go to the boss's office. Therein he expects romantic (lustful) activity to occur. Tongue tied and perspiring with stirring in his crotch he is crushed when she
summarily fires him! He is crushed to say the least. In fact he begins to experience a crushing sensation in his chest. He blacks out, waking up in an ICU at the American Hospital.

Sitting beside his bed is his girl friend. The room is full of color, orange color, brilliant orange color. He drifts in and out of consciousness. He holds his girl friend's hand.

A steady intermittent sound filters into his consciousness. Wondering what the noise is, he becomes more and more awake, realizing it is his radio alarm. The sunrise's orange light is streaming through the bedroom window directly in his face, and the song on the radio is "CRUSH" by the Dave Matthews band..

He rolls over cuddles and caresses his girlfriend awake, knowing he has plenty of time for a "little" and still beat the early morning crush at the metro. Basking in the afterglow of their love making, she asks him what he thinks of the new boss. He says he has a meeting with him first thing this morning to discuss his promotion.

As he leaves the apartment gazing at the magnificent nude figure of his love, he says, "Dinner at Les Deux Magots tonight?" Au revoir ma cher, je t'aime, bonjournee ;-)"


21 Comments:

Blogger Tess Kincaid said...

Now I think I need an Orange Crush...clever write, Rel...

8:53 AM  
Blogger Laurie Kolp said...

Dreamy!

9:08 AM  
Blogger paisley said...

love a good story with a twist!!!

9:11 AM  
Blogger Jinksy said...

That's what comes of having the word crush on the brain! LOL

9:59 AM  
Blogger Kay said...

very clever!!

10:30 AM  
Blogger Brian Miller said...

ha...i did not know which way was up there for a second...really nicely played rel...you went all over the emotional spectrum...lol...crushed

10:50 AM  
Blogger jabblog said...

Very nice:-)

11:16 AM  
Blogger Catfish Tales said...

But his new boss is only a woman in his dreams and yet a man in his waking conscious state. Now for him that must be some kind of crush. Clever write, you! Well done

11:23 AM  
Blogger Little Nell said...

Fantastic - in both senses of the word!

12:44 PM  
Blogger Kathe W. said...

excellent-I was crushed when the story was over.

1:34 PM  
Blogger Margaret said...

Lets hope he has no more crushes or his love might show him what the word "crush" truly can mean. :)

8:51 PM  
Blogger Dana Dampier said...

I think I have a crush on your story. I love it!

9:33 AM  
Blogger JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

love this... cool story!

JJRod'z

10:17 AM  
Blogger Helen said...

I'm with Tess .. going to head for my R.E.M. cd and 'Orange Crush'

12:45 PM  
Blogger Sue said...

Great story. I'm definitely crushin' on this one.

=)

6:21 PM  
Blogger Lee said...

How crushing!

I hope you had a wonderful birthday, Bob. :)

9:24 PM  
Blogger Dave King said...

Yup, I, too, am crushed! Cleverly done.

4:31 AM  
Anonymous Chris Lawrence said...

Brilliant Rel it had me held

7:48 AM  
Blogger Tumblewords: said...

I think he has it. Limerace, that is. :) A double-clever piece.

12:04 AM  
Anonymous Jenny said...

You are a talent,,,,,enjoyed reading your blog.

7:00 PM  
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