Verdun, 1917 by Felix Vallotton
Now here he was, cradled in the webbing seat of the uncomfortable cool cave
of the C130’s cargo hold.
Looking out at the sunny cumulus cloud
filled sky watching the beautiful billowy clouds passing in close proximity to
the plane’s window. Eddie was startled by a cloud formation that resembled a
person of great stature sitting on a throne.
He tried to decide if
the cloud sculpture was Odin, or Zeus, or may be
Neptune.
No not Neptune He’d show up if they
crashed in the ocean.
No, No it couldn’t be God he thought.
Well, He supposed it could be but anyway it was sure a curious
apparition.
As he continued to stare and conjure imaginings he
suddenly heard a voice, a deep baritone voice and there was no mistaking that it
was coming from the “God” on the cloud throne.
The voice and the
words were so clear, he had to look beside him to see if there was someone
sitting beside him and talking to him.
Nope, he was alone.
The voice said: Don’t come back this way again!
Eddie came home in 1965 and the war continued for another ten
years. Interestingly, Eddie refused to watch any newscast or read
any media concerning the war because when he did so he would be overcome with a
strong to desire to go that way again.
20 Comments:
Chills...nice write, Rel...
Interesting
Excellent creation of a special mood...
you captured so much of what could have been a deadly allure for Eddie. A scary glimpse of war and it's wrath.
Perfect timing ~ your Magpie! Just finished watching a three-part feature on Vietnam .. brought back the horror of those years. My former husband was in Da Nang during the Tet offensive. A fraternity brother was blown to bits after only six weeks 'in country' ... Absolutely!!
'don't come back this way again'
From what I know of God, he does encourage conflict between tribes of His Human Creation, the bastard!
Potent.
Nice piece of writing this
Wander
Good take on this week's prompt.
"Don’t come back this way again!"
A poignant message not to be taken lightly. Human conflicts are madness. Nice write Rel!
Hank
So imaginative..we must pay attention to the inner voice!
Ahhhhh....I like the spin on this!
And for some reason I had the picture of Marlon Brando in Apocalypse Now in my head! Too many flicks, for me, I guess!
nothing like a friendly warning at a crucial juncture . if only COLONEL kurtz had listened
Love the journey of this poem...and the ending works so well.
=)
Too often it felt like Apocalypse Now.
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Great tale, chillingly well told.
That says it all...
Chilling stuff of the ways of mankind...
Anna :o]
My heart was in my mouth as I read this good write.
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