There is a rumorabout
that says;
spontaneous thought
has been locked away
in the secluded
corner
where thoughts are
hidden,
to fester and maim
silently.
try as I may,
can't shake this
feeling
Labels: 3WW rumor, shake, spontaneous
posted by rel at 5:52 AM
11 Comments:
Nicely written. Makes me think of Orwell and the other great writers who have predicted thought control.
rumor or not,, i tend to believe there is more than a seed of truth there.....
There's no dictator like a consensus. It certainly ruins spontaneous thought, yet still cons you you are free.
You put the problem beautifully here.
Thought control...seems to be linked to language and books.
Rel,
Spontaneous thought if hidden can maim. I agree and what a perfect shot to capture it. HUGS
Kind of a scary thought.
Very nice piece. I also like the tree.
Frightening stuff (with an appropriately spooky picture!)
Deep. Nice work! Well crafted poem that bears many readings.
traded in for complacency... freedom's just another world for nothin left to lose.. awesome photo...
You wrote truth and illustrated it with a picture of vision. Excellent post!
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